Full words, sounds, puzzles
of rhyming meter seduce
Trite words, blunt needles
pierce poet balloons. Latex
oozes broken air.
© 2011 Kim King
I didn’t know which was your poetry for the Rally, so being attracted to haiku, I decided to drop in on this 🙂 Both say so much in so less, but perhaps it is the poet in me.. that I love the love one best! Thanks for the read, Kim! 😉
Thanks! I love haiku as well, but tend to stick to narrative poetry. Not sure, I think “The Table’ was picked , but glad you liked the others.
I’ll be checking yours out!
I love the 2 Haiku! Anti-love always ouch! 🙂
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